Please don't make me spell it out for you

I'm still tinkering. What do you reckon? Is this one a hit or a miss? Your frank (nay, brutal) feedback will guide my efforts, so please give it to me with both barrels! One-word reviews welcome!

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Comment by The Rusty Can

January 2nd 2009 11:27

Everything

I think it'll work, Paul. Personally, I'd like it more if the writing wasn't in a box and was printed in some other colour - say pink or blue, (yellow if on a black singlet).

And congrats on your success so far - hope your year gets better and better!

Rusty.

Comment by moonglow

January 2nd 2009 15:43

A Lot of Scrap
Paranormal Paranormal
Teacup Tales
Rubber Ball
In Zoo

Honestly, I can't read it. Let me know what it says. I like the shirt style, though!

Comment by katyzzz

January 2nd 2009 21:34

Photography Tips
MS Paint Art

Congrats, it IS hard to read, what's that you say? but it is funny, needs much larger type, otherwise smart, smarta......

Comment by Paul

January 2nd 2009 21:40

Surreal Short Stories

You guys are so generous! Thanks very much for your ace feedback! I will take it all on board & post the result. Best regards indeed! P.

Comment by moonglow

January 3rd 2009 00:46

A Lot of Scrap
Paranormal Paranormal
Teacup Tales
Rubber Ball
In Zoo

Okay, moonglow's eyes have adjusted now that it is nighttime and I can read it.

It is hilarious!! And, again, I love the style! I'm longing for summer!

Comment by Paul

January 3rd 2009 01:04

Surreal Short Stories

Yay! Glad you got it, moonglow. I will produce a new, improved version in due course. All designs come in long sleeves, by the way. Best regards, P.

Comment by Janet Collins

January 3rd 2009 06:00

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The Social Critic
Janet Collins Blog

I ad trouble reading this also. In fact I had to scroll my mouse over it and the words came out in a box on the side. Very funny but I dare say, the print needs to be bigger.

Comment by Paul

January 3rd 2009 06:03

Surreal Short Stories

Thank you, Janet; I'm sure glad I didn't have 200 of these printed in advance!

Comment by Wilson Pon

January 4th 2009 12:17

Health 2 Know
Adventure Toes
Techno Stuffs
boxing sound
Business Rope

Honestly, I think it would be better, if you print the words in larger fonts, Paul.

Comment by Paul

January 4th 2009 20:18

Surreal Short Stories

Many thanks, Wilson; that's great advice which I've followed. Check my latest post for the result! Best regards, P.

Comment by D. Armenta

February 4th 2009 19:10

The Florida Keys and Everglades
The Black Sheep Chronicles
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The male mystique
Debate Fan

Like it.

Sell it!

Comment by Paul

February 9th 2009 02:28

Surreal Short Stories

Many thanks, D. The revised version has now sold two units. In the blurb that goes with it at the LINK, I thank Orblers for their input. That now includes you! Best regards, P.

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